Nice to meet you! I'm "pooh"!
I want to be a docter who can speak English fluently.
So ,if there are some mistakes in my sentences, please tell me the mistake without hesitating it.
Please remenber me.
「ぷう」さん、これも何かの縁でしょうか、僕のページに足あとが・・・
というわけで英文についてですが、いい文章です(まだまだ僕も完璧じゃないんで)。間違いをひとつあげるとするならば without hesitating it よりもwithout hesitating to do it. の方がいいのでは、と思います。理由はhesitate にかかる目的語を説明するのにto do (to tell と同じ)が必要で、ここの「it」はmistakeを指しているからです。
あとは(あ、一つじゃなかったか?)単複をそろえるとよりよくなると思います。some mistakes とthe mistakeとitとか。
please remember meは・・・いらないと思います。Nice to meet youでカバーされているので。
>しゅうへい様
Thank you for answering my message!!
I'm glad to correct my sentences.
For me, it is difficult to write sentences correctely in English...
I'll be careful not to make the same mistakes!
Please teach me mistakes after this in writing English.
Thank you.
I am studying construction management and environmental
management in University.
In summer this year, international institute in Thailand sheet home to me that my English is very poor.
Therefore, Please advice error and misunderstanding of my english writing.