バイリンガルへの道!!コミュの添削してみよう♪　【その1】

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I go to shopping to the city yesterday. I wanted to buy a birthday present for my friends.　When I was looking for something good in a shop, I see lady who is acting suspiciously. She gripping anything small tightly in her hand which looks like one of products of a shop. I think what she was doing in the shop and I guessed that she was trying steal the thing she was gripping. When she turn a corner of a shelf, She put the thing in her bag!!
I am sure she shoplifted. I told everything to a shop assistant who is closer to me what I have seen. A shop assistant check a place that she standing and he found one produst was missing. a lady is still in a shop so t
he shop assistant can cought her when she leave a shop.