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Although Japanese products are highly valued in the world, it is just overrated. In the future, Japan will be left behind from other countries. There are two reason for this: Parents are spoiling their children and the quality of education in Japan has decreased.
Firstly, Japanese parents tend to spoil their own children. The children also take blessings for granted. Under this situation, if parents try to handle their children at their disposal, the children no longer obey their parents. These kinds of things cause a serious problem. For instance, the rate of juvenile delinquency in Japan is going up. The children neglect their studies and don't have any motivation. Furthermore, people who don't work anymore since they graduate from university in Japan is called Neet. The problem of increased Neet has become an issue of public concern. In the future, prominent human resource in Japan will decrease.
Secondly, thirty years ago, Japan had a solid education policy a reason why the government was sure that a competitive education was the most effective wat for children and capitalism. Additionally, the people of the era experienced a lot of hardship and they were eager to study, because they were always pursuing their dreams. But now, most children give up acquiring their dreams. On the contrary, they don't want to even compete with others. The government does not let children compete either. For example, The government so respects the will of children that they have already abolished competition on sports day and never exhibit the result of students' tests. Finally,children are not sensitive to others and they have forgotten how to survive this severe society. Therefore, even though many countries regard Japan as a good county, all of these will change. In addition people have to realize what we should do for children now.