English-let's get seriousコミュの単語－７

s(to buy, new, where)

(to achieve, moderate, a coward)

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I went to the midtown to buy new books.
As I was not sure where the book store was, I got completely lost.

To achieve higher aim, it is important to have self-confidence, as well as make efforts.
Sometimes, I say to myself, "Do not be a coward".
However, being proud of myself tend to make me confrontational.
That's why I have to keep in mind that I should be moderate in communicating to others.

どうでしょうか。

[2] mixiユーザー 04月12日 06:05

I went to the midtown to buy new books.
As I was not sure where the book store was, I got completely lost.

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ここから違う文章
To achieve higher aim, it is important to have self-confidence, as well as make efforts.
Sometimes, I say to myself, "Do not be a coward".
However, being proud of myself tend to make me confrontational.
That's why I have to keep in mind that I should be moderate in communicating to others

[3] mixiユーザー 04月13日 10:49

最初の文章は何も直す必要はないですよ。

一番最後の文章の手直しをお願いします。というよりも一つ、２つ言葉を代えてみるとすごくよい文章になります。

[4] mixiユーザー 04月15日 02:42

>That's why I have to keep in mind that I should be moderate in communicating to others.

That's why I always keep in mind that I should be moderate in communicating to others.

でどうでしょう。
have to とshould　をふたつ使う必要がない気がしました。

[5] mixiユーザー 04月15日 03:59

その通りですね。それから、私が気になるのは、moderate　の部分なのです。humble　とか、friendly, のような言葉の方がしっくり来ると思います．でも、これは個人の好みかなぁ

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