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ひめさん、こんばんは。よろしくお願いします。
1. The flights at the airports in east coast in the States are late
because of bad weather.
2. I bought new shoes and walked around so much with them. And I got a
blister on my right foot.
3. I hear there are plastic sheets to bury under the ground so that
they can prevent weeds from growing.
4. The plastic sheets make air and water go through them, and
moreover, is very ecological.
5. Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined, won the Oscar.
6. Something is wrong with my keypad of PC. It's hard to enter keys.
7. Call people's name with accurate accent, or it doesn't get through them.
1. The flights at the airports in east coast in the States are late
because of bad weather.
2. I bought new shoes and walked around so much with them. And I got a
blister on my right foot.
3. I hear there are plastic sheets to bury under the ground so that
they can prevent weeds from growing.
4. The plastic sheets make air and water go through them, and
moreover, is very ecological.
5. Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined, won the Oscar.
6. Something is wrong with my keypad of PC. It's hard to enter keys.
7. Call people's name with accurate accent, or it doesn't get through them.
たつさん、こんにちは。
＞1. The flights at the airports in east coast in the States are late
because of bad weather.
The flight from the airports in the east costですね。Statesはいらないです。
＞2. I bought new shoes and walked around so much with them. And I got a
blister on my right foot.
very good! right ankle でもいいですね。
＞3. I hear there are plastic sheets to bury under the ground so that
they can prevent weeds from growing.
excellent!
＞4. The plastic sheets make air and water go through them, and
moreover, is very ecological.
very good!
＞5. Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined, won the Oscar.
Al Gore joined to produce とひとつ言葉を加えるとmuch better!
＞6. Something is wrong with my keypad of PC. It's hard to enter keys.
very good! enter sentences でもいいですよね。
＞7. Call people's name with accurate accent, or it doesn't get through them.
it doesn't get through them よりもthey don't understand you くらいでよいと思います。
＞1. The flights at the airports in east coast in the States are late
because of bad weather.
The flight from the airports in the east costですね。Statesはいらないです。
＞2. I bought new shoes and walked around so much with them. And I got a
blister on my right foot.
very good! right ankle でもいいですね。
＞3. I hear there are plastic sheets to bury under the ground so that
they can prevent weeds from growing.
excellent!
＞4. The plastic sheets make air and water go through them, and
moreover, is very ecological.
very good!
＞5. Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined, won the Oscar.
Al Gore joined to produce とひとつ言葉を加えるとmuch better!
＞6. Something is wrong with my keypad of PC. It's hard to enter keys.
very good! enter sentences でもいいですよね。
＞7. Call people's name with accurate accent, or it doesn't get through them.
it doesn't get through them よりもthey don't understand you くらいでよいと思います。
WAKAさん、こんにちは。
＞1.The planes are delayed at the east coast airports because of the bad weather.
very good!
＞2.I walked a long distance wearing new shoes and got a shoe sore on my right foot.
靴擦れはblister を使います。
I got a blister on my right ankle.
＞3.I heard there is a plastic sheet. We can bury it in the ground to prevent from growing weeds.
prevent weeds from growing. ですよね。
＞4.The sheet can be through with air and water and environmentally friendly.
The sheet can let air and water go through it... としたらどうでしょう？
＞5.Incovenient Truth that Al Gore made and still participats for it won the Oscars.
Al Gore participated in producing かな。
＞6.The keypad of my PC is something wrong. So it is hard to input sentences.
Something is wrong with the keypad of my PC という順序の方がすっきりはいってきます。
＞7.When you call someone's name, you have to be careful with the pronounciation. Otherwise the person you are
talking to can't notice it.
もちろんpronunciaiton も大切なのですが、アクセントもとても大事です。
せっかくですからcan't notice you are addressing him/her.
＞1.The planes are delayed at the east coast airports because of the bad weather.
very good!
＞2.I walked a long distance wearing new shoes and got a shoe sore on my right foot.
靴擦れはblister を使います。
I got a blister on my right ankle.
＞3.I heard there is a plastic sheet. We can bury it in the ground to prevent from growing weeds.
prevent weeds from growing. ですよね。
＞4.The sheet can be through with air and water and environmentally friendly.
The sheet can let air and water go through it... としたらどうでしょう？
＞5.Incovenient Truth that Al Gore made and still participats for it won the Oscars.
Al Gore participated in producing かな。
＞6.The keypad of my PC is something wrong. So it is hard to input sentences.
Something is wrong with the keypad of my PC という順序の方がすっきりはいってきます。
＞7.When you call someone's name, you have to be careful with the pronounciation. Otherwise the person you are
talking to can't notice it.
もちろんpronunciaiton も大切なのですが、アクセントもとても大事です。
せっかくですからcan't notice you are addressing him/her.
こんばんは。よろしくお願いします。
1.The airplanes in U.S. East coast airports are delayed because of the foul weather.
2. My right foot has a blister because I walked for a quite long time with my brand new shoes.
3.I heard that there is a vinyl sheet to spread out under the soil. It's shuts out weeds.
（どうしても文の繋げ方が分からなかったので２分割しました。m(__)m
4. It not only let air through but water, and also it's environment-friendly.
5. The movie[Incovenient Truth], which Al Gore had participated in a making
won the oscar.
6. My computer's keypad is in bad condition so it's hard to type.
7. If you don't be careful of accent when you call somebody's name, the person won't understand you.
1.The airplanes in U.S. East coast airports are delayed because of the foul weather.
2. My right foot has a blister because I walked for a quite long time with my brand new shoes.
3.I heard that there is a vinyl sheet to spread out under the soil. It's shuts out weeds.
（どうしても文の繋げ方が分からなかったので２分割しました。m(__)m
4. It not only let air through but water, and also it's environment-friendly.
5. The movie[Incovenient Truth], which Al Gore had participated in a making
won the oscar.
6. My computer's keypad is in bad condition so it's hard to type.
7. If you don't be careful of accent when you call somebody's name, the person won't understand you.
morricさん、こんばんは。
＞1.The airplanes in U.S. East coast airports are delayed because of the foul weather.
The airplanes departing from the U.S.... と、depart という言葉をいれたほうがよくなりますね。それからthe foul weather も悪くありませんがシンプルにbad weather/severe weather が使われることが多いですね。
2. My right foot has a blister because I walked for a quite long time with my brand new shoes.
very nice!
My right ankle has としてもいいですよ。
3.I heard that there is a vinyl sheet to spread out under the soil. It's shuts out weeds.
（どうしても文の繋げ方が分からなかったので２分割しました。m(__)m
ハイ、このように分けることはとても良いと思いますよ。無理にだらだらととした長い文章でわかりづらいよりもずっと良いです。
It shuts out ですね。
4. It not only let air through but water, and also it's environment-friendly.
lets と3人称単数にしましょう。
確認ですが、not only〜but also のalso をあとに持ってきているわけじゃないですよね。
5. The movie[Incovenient Truth], which Al Gore had participated in a making
won the oscar.
in a making をin producing にしましょう。
6. My computer's keypad is in bad condition so it's hard to type.
very nice!
7. If you don't be careful of accent when you call somebody's name, the person won't understand you.
don't beではなくてare not とした方がよくありません?
careful with the accent かな。
＞1.The airplanes in U.S. East coast airports are delayed because of the foul weather.
The airplanes departing from the U.S.... と、depart という言葉をいれたほうがよくなりますね。それからthe foul weather も悪くありませんがシンプルにbad weather/severe weather が使われることが多いですね。
2. My right foot has a blister because I walked for a quite long time with my brand new shoes.
very nice!
My right ankle has としてもいいですよ。
3.I heard that there is a vinyl sheet to spread out under the soil. It's shuts out weeds.
（どうしても文の繋げ方が分からなかったので２分割しました。m(__)m
ハイ、このように分けることはとても良いと思いますよ。無理にだらだらととした長い文章でわかりづらいよりもずっと良いです。
It shuts out ですね。
4. It not only let air through but water, and also it's environment-friendly.
lets と3人称単数にしましょう。
確認ですが、not only〜but also のalso をあとに持ってきているわけじゃないですよね。
5. The movie[Incovenient Truth], which Al Gore had participated in a making
won the oscar.
in a making をin producing にしましょう。
6. My computer's keypad is in bad condition so it's hard to type.
very nice!
7. If you don't be careful of accent when you call somebody's name, the person won't understand you.
don't beではなくてare not とした方がよくありません?
careful with the accent かな。
１． The flights from the airports in the East are delayed because of bad weather.
Now, the weather is getting better.
２．I walked much with new shoes and I made my right heel hurt.
３．There are plastic sheets which we can immerse in soil to prevent weed from growing.
４．It is pervious to air and water and environmental.
５．Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined for filming, got Oscar.
６．The key pad of my PC doesn’t work well and I have difficulty to put my sentences in it.
７．If you call someone, pay attention to pronounce his name with properly accent.
Otherwise, he would not understand you.
Now, the weather is getting better.
２．I walked much with new shoes and I made my right heel hurt.
３．There are plastic sheets which we can immerse in soil to prevent weed from growing.
４．It is pervious to air and water and environmental.
５．Inconvenient Truth, which Al Gore joined for filming, got Oscar.
６．The key pad of my PC doesn’t work well and I have difficulty to put my sentences in it.
７．If you call someone, pay attention to pronounce his name with properly accent.
Otherwise, he would not understand you.
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