I'm Kirinsan(^^)
I still can't speak English well,even though I've
studyed it at an English-conversation school
for more than a year.
But I will correct your English, though presumptuous.^^;
I live in place is Aichi.
→I live in Aichi.
(You can't use 'live' and 'is' in one phrase.)
23 old year ago.
→I'm 23 years old.
My favorite musician is WANDS Mr.Children,old song etc.
→My favorite musicians are・・・・
I get for three years.
→I got it three years ago.
I become to elepahnt.
→I have become to an elephant.
I'm not sure if my indications are perfectly correct.^^;
You should check them by yourself again.
Nice to meet you too.
My name is motokou.
I was born in okinawa,and nowI live in Tokyo.
I'm 21years old.
I can't speak English well,but I want to learn English.