Okay, here is another one for you all. I'm sorry, but since the number of members in our community has been increasing, I won't be able to give you specific feedback each time. I'll only be able to tell you if you're right or wrong. m(_ _)m This one might be a little difficult. Good luck!!! p(^-^)q
Hello, my name is Busuke. I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student. I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher. I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true. Please wish good luck to me!!
Hello, my name is Busuke. I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student. I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher. I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true. Please wish good luck to me!!
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Hello, my name is Busuke. I'm a Nagoya Central High School the 3rd year student. I will graduate next Spring and hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelor's Degree in Education. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independant. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher. I'm going to study very hard so my dream is going to come true. Please wish me good luck!!
Hello, my name is Busuke. I'm the 3rd year student of Nagoya Central High School . I will graduate next Spring and hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get Bachelor's Degree of Education. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independant. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher. I'm going to study very hard so my dream is going to come true. Please wish me good luck!!
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Hello, my name is Busuke. I'm in the 3rd year student at the Nagoya Central high School. I will graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelor's Degree in Education. I want to live alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independent. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher. I'm going to study very hard so my dream will come true. Please wishing good luck for me!!
Hmm, this one must be pretty difficult. I'll make it a little easier. If you try with this story below instead, I'll tell you the numbers to which sentences yo have mistakes in. p(^-^)q
1. Hello, my name is Busuke.
2. I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student.
3. I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education.
4. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance.
5. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher.
6. I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true.
7. Please wish good luck to me!!
1. Hello, my name is Busuke.
2. I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student.
3. I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education.
4. I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance.
5. Someday, my dream is to become a teacher.
6. I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true.
7. Please wish good luck to me!!
1.Hello. My name is Busuke.
2. I'm in the 3rd year student at the Nagoya Central high School.
3. I will graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelor's Degree in Education.
4.I want to live alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I'll be able to learn to be independent.
5.It's my dream is to become a teacher someday.
6.I'm going to study very hard so my dream will come true.
7.Please wishing good luck for me!!
10個以上変更しちゃいました。。。。
2. I'm in the 3rd year student at the Nagoya Central high School.
3. I will graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelor's Degree in Education.
4.I want to live alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I'll be able to learn to be independent.
5.It's my dream is to become a teacher someday.
6.I'm going to study very hard so my dream will come true.
7.Please wishing good luck for me!!
10個以上変更しちゃいました。。。。
Hello, My name is Busuke. I'm a 3rd year student at Nagoya Central High School. I will graduate from there next spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree of Education. I want to live by alone at apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance. Someday, my dream would become a teacher. I'm going to study very hard so my dream is going to come true. Please wish me good luck !!
Hello busuke-chan,
I hope you dont mind if I edit some parts. I added some explanation too.
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Hello, my name is Busuke. (okei)
-> I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student.
**This sentence is okei but may sound not natural in english. Better way would be -> "I am a 3rd year student of Nagoya Central High School." (Do not use grade, because "grade" is used for elementary students.)
->I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education.
**One key pointer, when using "will + be + verb" then you have to use the verb + "ing" (progressive). But if using "will" only, then use present tense. So :
1) I will be graduating next Spring and will hopefully go to Tokyo University to get my Bachelor's Degree in Education. (Tokyo University is more natural than University of Tokyo, and "my" is better than "a" in this case.)
2) I will graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to Tokyo University to get my Bachelor's Degree in Education. (Tokyo University is more natural than University of Tokyo, and "my" is better than "a" in this case.)
-> I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance.
** I want to live alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn how to be independent. "alone" in this case is already an adverb, a description of how you want to live. If you want to use "by" (like in nihonggo 自分で）
** I want to live all by myself in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn how to be independent
When you want to use "to be" in this case, it should be "how to be + adjective ". If you dont want the "how to be" form then the best way would be :
** I want to live all by myself in an apartment in Tokyo so I can be independent.
->I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true.
** If you are using "going to" use the present tense of the verb. Example "going to study", "going to create", "going to invent". :)
->I'm going to study very hard ....
** "so my dream is going to come true". This phrase is quite difficult. But if stating a purpose, sometimes "so that" is more natural. And since this will happen in the future, please dont use "is going to come true." but plainly the future tense "my dream will come true."
->I'm going to study very hard so that my dream will come true.
-> Please wish good luck to me!!
** Gramatically okei but this is kinda unnatural. Better way is :
Please wish me luck.
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PS : I wish you luck on your endeavors. And never be afraid of failure and mistakes. You are young and you have a great future ahead of you.
Take care,
GovZ
I hope you dont mind if I edit some parts. I added some explanation too.
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Hello, my name is Busuke. (okei)
-> I'm a Nagoya Central High School's 3rd year student.
**This sentence is okei but may sound not natural in english. Better way would be -> "I am a 3rd year student of Nagoya Central High School." (Do not use grade, because "grade" is used for elementary students.)
->I will be graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to University of Tokyo to get a Bachelors Degree in Education.
**One key pointer, when using "will + be + verb" then you have to use the verb + "ing" (progressive). But if using "will" only, then use present tense. So :
1) I will be graduating next Spring and will hopefully go to Tokyo University to get my Bachelor's Degree in Education. (Tokyo University is more natural than University of Tokyo, and "my" is better than "a" in this case.)
2) I will graduate next Spring and will hopefully go to Tokyo University to get my Bachelor's Degree in Education. (Tokyo University is more natural than University of Tokyo, and "my" is better than "a" in this case.)
-> I want to live by alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn to be independance.
** I want to live alone in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn how to be independent. "alone" in this case is already an adverb, a description of how you want to live. If you want to use "by" (like in nihonggo 自分で）
** I want to live all by myself in an apartment in Tokyo so I can learn how to be independent
When you want to use "to be" in this case, it should be "how to be + adjective ". If you dont want the "how to be" form then the best way would be :
** I want to live all by myself in an apartment in Tokyo so I can be independent.
->I'm going to studying very hard so my dream is going to come true.
** If you are using "going to" use the present tense of the verb. Example "going to study", "going to create", "going to invent". :)
->I'm going to study very hard ....
** "so my dream is going to come true". This phrase is quite difficult. But if stating a purpose, sometimes "so that" is more natural. And since this will happen in the future, please dont use "is going to come true." but plainly the future tense "my dream will come true."
->I'm going to study very hard so that my dream will come true.
-> Please wish good luck to me!!
** Gramatically okei but this is kinda unnatural. Better way is :
Please wish me luck.
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PS : I wish you luck on your endeavors. And never be afraid of failure and mistakes. You are young and you have a great future ahead of you.
Take care,
GovZ
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