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Hint: There are 10 mistakes!! Please rewrite the whole story. I'll let you know if you're 100% right or not. (^_-)

GOOD LUCK!!!

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was really great fun night. All of my friends from University was there. The last times that I met them were about 6 years ago. They all looked so much different. Almost I didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beers. The next morning I had terrible hangover. But, it's okay. It was a so nice to see and caught up with everyone again.

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[46] mixiユーザー 08月10日 10:41

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was really great and fun night. All of my friends from University were there. The last that I met them was about 6 years ago. They looked so different.I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hangover. But, it was okay. It was a so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

How is this?

[47] mixiユーザー 08月10日 14:05

Hi りえさん。You are 88%right.(^.^)Please try again.p(^^)q

[48] mixiユーザー 08月10日 14:07

尼ちゃん、99% right!p(^-^)qp(^-^)qp(^-^)q

[49] mixiユーザー 08月10日 14:09

みなじんさん、98% right.o(^^)o

[50] mixiユーザー 08月10日 14:15

Shall we keep going or would you like me to tell you all the answer?(^.^)

[52] mixiユーザー 08月10日 18:50

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was the really great and fun night. All of my friends from University was there. The last time I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I Almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had terrible hungover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

I don't know... that't why I don't like grammer!!

[53] mixiユーザー 08月10日 19:07

Uuuu....Please tell me all the answer!
Because I have little English grammar(T_T)

[54] mixiユーザー 08月10日 19:47

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was a really great and fun night. All of my friends from University was there. The last time that I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hungover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

I dislike grammer! But I wanna try....How's this?

[56] mixiユーザー 08月10日 20:51

Pockyさん, 3 mistakes.
菜未さん, 2 mistakes.

I'm not sure what I should do. Some people want to know the answer, and other people don't want me to tell them the answer yet. So, let's have a vote... Please type, "Yes" is you want to continue trying. Please type, "No" if you give up and want me to tell you the answer. Deadline for the voting is 12 midnight Japan time. (^-^)/~

[58] mixiユーザー 08月10日 23:44

I wanna try... but, ok. I vote「NO」

I'll try ;) How about this? This might be the last time...

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was the really great and fun night. All of my friends from University were there. The last time I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hungover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

[59] mixiユーザー 08月11日 00:22

菜未さん、２ mistakes!! p(^_^)q

それと、Ｖｏｔｅは延長で明日の昼までまちます。今日はもう寝るね。おやすみ～Ｚｚｚ

[60] mixiユーザー 08月11日 00:45

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was a really great and fun night. All of my friends from University were there. The last time that I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hungover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

Ok, I'll still try...Maybe there is 1 mistake now??? vote が閉めきるまでtryします。けど私のvoteは「NO」でお願いします；）Good night!

[61] mixiユーザー 08月11日 09:37

It's last try...I can't think any more!

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was really great and funny night. All of my friends from University were there. The last time that I met them was about 6 years ago. They looked so different.I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hangover. But, it was okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

[63] mixiユーザー 08月11日 22:30

菜未さん、you are sooooo close!!! Just 1 mistake left. p(^0^)q

みなじんさん、2 mistakes. p(^-^)q You can do it!!!

尼さん、2 mistakes too. p(^-^)q You can do it!!!

Okay, I will post the correct answer at 11:30pm tonight. Everybody has 1 last chance. (^_-) 頑張って!

[65] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:11

Oh! Nooooo!! I don't have enough time!
どこが違うの？ I don't know.... (T_T) 悔しい．．．。
Ummm... I wanna try But...:S

[66] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:19

美歌さん、only 3 mistakes!! You're improving well!! (^_^)b

[67] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:20

菜未さん、you have 10 minutes!!! p(^-^)q

[69] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:30

Okay, are you all ready to hear the answer???(^_^)

[70] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:33

Okay.... :'

[71] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:38

I'm ready!

[72] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:40

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was a really great fun night. (OR, It was a really great and fun night. is okay too..)All of my friends from University were there. The last time that I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hangover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

みんなよく頑張りましたね。ｍ（__）ｍ　お疲れ様でした。
第２回もお楽しみに～！！

[73] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:46

Can you tell me? This is a my ansower. What was mistake?
とこが違うのかがわからない。。。（笑）

Last Saturday, I went to a party. It was a really great and fun night. All of my friends from University were there. The last time that I met them was about 6 years ago. They all looked so different. I almost didn't recognize them. Anyway, we ate tons of food and drank gallons of beer. The next morning I had a terrible hungover. But, it's okay. It was so nice to see and catch up with everyone again.

[74] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:47

"The next morning I had a terrible hungover..." Hungover should be HANGOVER. (^_-)

[75] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:50

Thank you for giving us a really good grammar exercise!
I'm looking forward to next exercise.
I would like to improve my English!

[77] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:53

Ahhh...I didn't notice that *LOL*
Thanks!
おもしろかった～。次も楽しみ～☆

[79] mixiユーザー 08月11日 23:56

美歌さん、"It was so nice to see and caught up with everyone again. " Should be CATCH up with everyone again... (^-^)

[81] mixiユーザー 08月12日 10:03

"All of my friends from University"... means, "All of my friends from my University days." or "All of my friends fom when I was a University student."
なので
"All of my friends IN University" sounds like you are still a University student now.

[82] mixiユーザー 08月12日 22:47

I was so close !!

[83] mixiユーザー 08月12日 23:08

Please,next an easy exercise.
I think so.

[84] mixiユーザー 08月12日 23:17

Pockyさん、Yes,you were very close! Maybe next time.(^_-)

[85] mixiユーザー 08月12日 23:18

みやちゃん、okay. Next time I'll give an easier test.また参加してね。(^.^)

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