今度研修旅行先のマレーシアで、英語でプレゼンをすることになりました。テーマ日本料理で、私は寿司について喋る内容を英語で書いたのですが、自信がないので間違った文法の訂正や表現の仕方などをアドバイスしていただきたく、トピックを作成しました。よろしくお願いします。
I introduce sushi.
Sushi is very famous Japanese food in the world.
it is a food made of vinegared rice combined with various toppings or fillings.
There are various types of sushi.
Nigiri-zushi,it is the most typical form of sushi.
Makizushi,it is wrapped in nori, a sheet of dried pressed laver.
In addition,there are Chirashi-zushi,Inari-zushi,and so forth.
Japanese people often eat Sushi.
But,not every day because it is a little expensive.
We also eat it when happiness happens.
Because,it is a dish of congratulation.
There are traditional Sushi bars and revolving sushi restaurants in Japan.
In a traditional sushi bar,a cook makes sushi immediately before we eat it.
But in a revolving sushi restaurant,
many dishes of Sushi are moving beforehand by a belt conveyer.
Because it is easy and the price is also low, it is popular.
Please eat Sushi when you come to Japan.
I introduce sushi.
Sushi is very famous Japanese food in the world.
it is a food made of vinegared rice combined with various toppings or fillings.
There are various types of sushi.
Nigiri-zushi,it is the most typical form of sushi.
Makizushi,it is wrapped in nori, a sheet of dried pressed laver.
In addition,there are Chirashi-zushi,Inari-zushi,and so forth.
Japanese people often eat Sushi.
But,not every day because it is a little expensive.
We also eat it when happiness happens.
Because,it is a dish of congratulation.
There are traditional Sushi bars and revolving sushi restaurants in Japan.
In a traditional sushi bar,a cook makes sushi immediately before we eat it.
But in a revolving sushi restaurant,
many dishes of Sushi are moving beforehand by a belt conveyer.
Because it is easy and the price is also low, it is popular.
Please eat Sushi when you come to Japan.
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最初の2文は
I'd like to talk about Sushi, very well-known Japanese food.
とまとめることもできますね。
＞We also eat it when happiness happens.
＞Because,it is a dish of congratulation.
congratulationsというのは「おめでとうございます」というあいさつ文なので、ここでは代わりにcelebration（お祝い）に替えた方がいいんじゃないかな、と思います。
最後の
＞Please eat Sushi when you come to Japan.
は、私だったら
Please try sushi if you have a chance.
にするかな。いまや寿司レストランは世界中にもありますし(笑)。あと、Please tryの方が礼儀正しく聞こえるかもしれません(^^)。
楽しんでプレゼンなさってくださいね。
I'd like to talk about Sushi, very well-known Japanese food.
とまとめることもできますね。
＞We also eat it when happiness happens.
＞Because,it is a dish of congratulation.
congratulationsというのは「おめでとうございます」というあいさつ文なので、ここでは代わりにcelebration（お祝い）に替えた方がいいんじゃないかな、と思います。
最後の
＞Please eat Sushi when you come to Japan.
は、私だったら
Please try sushi if you have a chance.
にするかな。いまや寿司レストランは世界中にもありますし(笑)。あと、Please tryの方が礼儀正しく聞こえるかもしれません(^^)。
楽しんでプレゼンなさってくださいね。
>with various toppings or fillings.
の例を7語ほどで付け足すといいかも。
>Nigiri-zushi,it is the most typical form of sushi.
の具体的な形式を12語ほどで付け足すといいかも。
>ちらし寿司、稲荷寿司
それぞれ10〜15語ほどで内容と、提供される場面を付け足すといいかも。
>Japanese people often eat Sushi.
のあと。ストーリー性と、統計的・歴史的に正確な構成にしたほうがいい。
How often? Well, it depends on people, and occasion. Sushi originally started in Edo era around bra century, as a form of fast-food. There still are a lot of sushi bars for quick lunch and dinner, typically rotating(revolving) sushi restaurant. In order to provide sushi at low price, the belt conveyer, instead of waiters, will bring sushi. Maybe it's very good children's attraction, and even for adults. But there are also expensive type of sushi. At parties and ceremonies, the people celebrate happiness with sushi. People either go to a nice sushi bar, or order delivery. Also on business and political invitation, people often want to invite their important guests to a "non-rotative" sushi.
ああ、想像力に書き立てられて、長くなっちゃった。
このへんでやめておいて、「あなたも日本に来て、いい寿司屋に招待されるといいですねえ」とか冗談を言って終わりにしたらどうでしょう。「回転寿司でも心配しないで。家庭的な雰囲気で出迎えて(ry
の例を7語ほどで付け足すといいかも。
>Nigiri-zushi,it is the most typical form of sushi.
の具体的な形式を12語ほどで付け足すといいかも。
>ちらし寿司、稲荷寿司
それぞれ10〜15語ほどで内容と、提供される場面を付け足すといいかも。
>Japanese people often eat Sushi.
のあと。ストーリー性と、統計的・歴史的に正確な構成にしたほうがいい。
How often? Well, it depends on people, and occasion. Sushi originally started in Edo era around bra century, as a form of fast-food. There still are a lot of sushi bars for quick lunch and dinner, typically rotating(revolving) sushi restaurant. In order to provide sushi at low price, the belt conveyer, instead of waiters, will bring sushi. Maybe it's very good children's attraction, and even for adults. But there are also expensive type of sushi. At parties and ceremonies, the people celebrate happiness with sushi. People either go to a nice sushi bar, or order delivery. Also on business and political invitation, people often want to invite their important guests to a "non-rotative" sushi.
ああ、想像力に書き立てられて、長くなっちゃった。
このへんでやめておいて、「あなたも日本に来て、いい寿司屋に招待されるといいですねえ」とか冗談を言って終わりにしたらどうでしょう。「回転寿司でも心配しないで。家庭的な雰囲気で出迎えて(ry
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