よし,一日10分間の,瞬間的な英作文します.
picture description 形式で,でも picture が無いので word descriptionで
「BOOK」
Books are constituted by some papers for certain intents.
For the book some information are collected along with the intent.
The intent is, for example, cooking, art, machine and etc.
All intents have the common large intent, that is propagation of the intent.
Some book is thin.
Some book is thick.
She is booked.
She is the most beautiful girl in the world.
Her hobby is reading a book !
文章のセンスが無い.
てにをはが間違っている.
冠詞,前置詞がおかしい.
時制がおかしい.
単複が適当.
文法が稚拙.
文章が単調.
意識しなきゃならないことが全くおさえられていない.
意識しなきゃならないことを押さえるって‥意識しながら書く練習を続けるしかないのだろう.
例えばinformationは不加算動詞なので、基本的には単数扱いです。
"some information is"と"some information are"で比べてみる。
前者は66,000,000で後者は4,200,000と圧倒的に前者が多いので、
isが正しいかなと判断する(感覚的にareを使う人もいるそうです)。
「temperature」
Temperature represent the strength of the molecule behaviors.
The behaviors are the translational motion of linear direction
or the rotational motion of the molecule with origin of molecule center.
The high temperature represents that molecule is exciting.
The convenience store is on the left of the street.
(The convenience store is on the other side of the street.)
There are some wrong with this computer.
(There seems to be something wrong with this computer.)
The latest novel he wrote is not selling well.
(I hear hes latest novel isn't selling very well.)
(I don't think there are many people who can do without mobile.)
(You should apologize to your friend right away for what you did.)
The causes of the death of patients remains the big mystery.
(The cause of the patient's death remains a big mystery.)
My car is unreliable. It keeps broken.
(My car is unreliable. It keeps breaking down.)
You cannot miss if you follow the instruction.
(You cannot go wrong if you follow the instruction.)
The oranges is too sour, so I don't like it.
(Those oranges taste too sour, so I don't like them.)
Some people dislike eels because they are look like snake.
(Some people dislike eels because they look like snakes.)
The elephant has long trunk and the rabbit has long ears.
(An elephant has a long trunk, and a rabbit has long ears)
The laud music kept me from getting much sleep last night.
She says her husband (sometimes) helps her with (the) housework.
The questionnaire revealed that every third students (student) has a car.
I hope Mr. and Mrs. Tanaka come to my birthday party tonight.
I'd appreciates it if you could call the airline and reserve seats for me.
Please explain to me that(Why) you failed to come yesteraday.
I owe him some money and have to pay him (back) by the weekend.
Expert(s) estimates(say) that the(too) much exercise is(dose us) more harm than good.
(A short walk will give my father a good appetite.)
(His attempt to save the drowning girl cost him his life.)
コメントありがとうございます.
英語をここに書き出しているのは,
I shouted loudly, but I couldn't make myself hardly across the large room.
自分の勉強のペースを保つためです.
遠くから見ていてくださる人がいることを勝手に想像しながら,
自分を保っていました(笑)