勉強中 for Gayコミュのhow to improve an essay

I have been studyingi for an eassy. I Know that it is so boring for Andrew(my ex ) to correct my essay. He always complains about that “it was so boring"
However, I start to enjoy writing any kind of topics.
Topics are such as, can you live without TV? Animal testing. Computers and education especially children education. Library and computers. Should retirement be compulsory at 65 ears of ages? Education is the single most important factor in the development of country do you agree? Will modern technology, such as the internet ever replace the book or the written word as the main sources of information?
Do you happen to know anyone " how to improve an eassy with these kind of topics"?
Cheers

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[1] mixiユーザー 02月16日 01:30

Hi. Are you a native speaker of English? Do you want to be a professional essayist or something? The topics you mentioned sound interesting. I think it's a good idea to ask someone to correct your essays. I hope you'll find someone. Good luck.

[2] mixiユーザー 02月17日 00:58

Howdy ?
I am not native speaker at all. Japanese !!
I am going to take some English examinations soon.
I am kinda good at speaking part like an interview, However,
it is so hard for me to write an essay such as topices...... I need to study more !!! I start to enjoy doing now in fact.

[3] mixiユーザー 02月24日 17:24

>To Mr. a1westlife
Since your pages were full of English and your English seemed natural, I thought you were a native speaker. I'm better at writing and reading than at speaking and listening. It's great you're good at speaking English. I think you write very well.

[4] mixiユーザー 02月25日 22:31

Hello Romeo,
I used to stay in london a bit and my ex was british.
That is why I like to speak....
By the way, how do you study for writing especially?
Cheers

[5] mixiユーザー 02月27日 00:01

Mr. a1westlife
You used to stay in London? How nice! How long did you stay there?
I took an essay writing class when I was at university. But my teacher never corrected my grammatical mistakes. Anyway, I think the best way to improve writing English is to write a lot, and to have a well-educated native speaker correct what you wrote. What do you think?

[6] mixiユーザー 02月27日 10:00

Dear Romeo.
I stayed in London for about two years. I had a brilliant time !!! There were a lot of cute guys there. Anyway,
I totally agree with you, I mean I always ask my ex to correct my essay. In addition, I try to write an essay at least once or twice a week... Cheers.
By the way, are you in the middle of studying ?

[7] mixiユーザー 02月28日 11:22

Dear Mr. a1westlife,
No wonder you write English so well. Yes, I'm in the middle of studying for a couple of English exams. Do you have to write an essay in one of the exams you're going to take?

[8] mixiユーザー 02月28日 15:05

Hello Romeo,

Yes I have to write an essay. However, my concern is reading. I have to get used to do speed reading. When are you going to take an examination? soon? cheers

[9] mixiユーザー 03月01日 21:30

Mr. a1westlife,
Are you going to take the TOEFL or something? I'm going to take the TOEIC this month. And I'm going to take a different exam someday in the near future. Why don't we exchange messages instead of writing here?

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