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January 2nd

A very Happy New Year to everyone !
I wish you will be happy and healthy (you happiness and good health) in 2008.


I've learned English （I've been learning English ）
for nearly 20 years but still my writing skill(s) is quite
poor, so I've decided to keep diary in English on
the mixi diary page as long as I can.
It will help to improve my writing skill(s).

I received many New Year's cards this year same as every year.
I found some changes in them.(I noticed some changes in the people who wrote them.)
We "baby boomers" are going into retirement.
Actually some of my friends have already retired.
There are several differences among them after retirement.(There has been several differences in them after retirement.)
One has a pretty easy life.
One has started to work for another company.
One is doing nothing.

I think that people need (the)appropriate stimulus and incentives in order to get
a feeling of satisfaction.
Of course, it is not easy to find a job that offers good job conditions.


January 3rd

Yesterday and today channel 8 Fuji TV has rebroadcasted one of it's popular
TV drama series "Nodame Cantabire".
The drama is based on the best seller comic book.
The drama is a love(romantic) comedy about two musical school students,
a guy, Chiaki, who is talented and wants to be a famous conductor, a girl,
Nodame who is also talented but very naive, even childish.

I'm a classical music lover.
I'm very impressed with the (every episode of) TV drama whenever it is broadcasted, as it uses many classic(classical) masterpiece in every episode.

Beethoven's Symphony No.7 which is one of my favorites among the all of the
Symphonies in the world, is used for the opening theme.
George Gershwin's "Rhapsody in Blue" is used for the ending theme.

Any other classical masterpieces are also used for at the most suitable
sceneal (used appropriately in various scenes ) in the drama.


以下はネイティヴチェック済みすべてです。

A very Happy New Year to everyone !

> I wish you happiness and good health in 2008.
>
> I've been learning English for nearly 20 years but my writing skills are still quite

> poor, so I've decided to keep diary in English on
> the mixi diary page as long as I can.

> It will help to improve my writing skills.

>
> I received many New Year's cards this year same as every year.

> I noticed some changes in the people who wrote them.

> We "baby boomers" are going into retirement.
> Actually some of my friends have already retired.

> There has been several differences in them after retirement.

> One has a pretty easy life.
> One has started to work for another company.
> One is doing nothing.
>

> I think that people need the appropriate stimulus and incentives in order to get
> a feeling of satisfaction.
> Of course, it is not easy to find a job that offers good conditions.
>
>
> January 3rd
>
> Yesterday and today channel 8 Fuji TV rebroadcasted one of it's popular

> TV drama series "Nodame Cantabire".
> The drama is based on the best seller comic book.

> The drama is a romantic comedy about two musical school students,

> a guy, Chiaki, who is talented and wants to be a famous conductor, a girl,
> Nodame who is also talented but very naive, even childish.
>
> I'm a classical music lover.

> I'm very impressed with every episode of the TV drama , as it uses
> many classical masterpieces in every episode.

>
> Beethoven's Symphony No.7, which is one of my favorites among the all of the
> Symphonies in the world, is used for the opening theme.
> George Gershwin's "Rhapsody in Blue" is used for the ending theme.
>

>many other classical masterpieces are also used appropriately
> in various scenes in the drama.