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Hi I'm Makoto Satoh. Hamajim, please chek my speech.

I'll toke about Three mejor World Film Festival.
Fist, I talk about The Venice Film Festival. It is the oldest film festival in the world. It began in 1932. And it has taken place every year in August or early September.

Second, Cannes Film Festival. It is very famous. All over the world actor and prducer jointo festival. And there are many fair open.

Finally, Berlin Film Festival. This festival is famous for SPIRITED AWAY was exhibit. SPIRITED AWAY is known in Japan as SEN TO THIHIRO NO KAMIKAKUSI.

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[1] mixiユーザー 07月07日 21:57

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I'll toke about Three mejor World Film Festival
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I'll talk about three major World Film Festivals.

And it（has taken place削除）takes place every year in August or early September.

All over the world actor and prducer jointo festival.
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From all over the world, actors and producers join (to) the festival
And there, many fair and evens start..

Finally, Berlin Film Festival. This festival is known that ‘Spirited Away’ was exhibit.
Spirited Away is known in Japan as SEN TO THIHIRO NO KAMIKAKUSI.

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