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Today I’d like to talk on Christian religion.
I have two reasons(複数だからs) why I became interested in it.
First I will tell you the reason, then I’ll introduce compactly about Christian.


Now, I’ll tell my experience.
I went to U.S.A. last spring vacation, and I had stayed with my host family, and they are Christian so,
I could join some Christian event for example, I went to Church on Sunday.
There were many people who (come)　→　過去形came to church.
The beginning of fold, people say “Good morning , How are you?” and we sang some carol and pray and listened to Bible study.

This is the first reason and second reason is that I went to Christian kindergarten.
When I was kindergartener, I pray every morning in my class.

I remember that I used to like to pray.
I don’t know why but I guess, it was just fun.


I’d like to talk on some wisdom of Christian.
First, Christianity is a monotheistic religion centered on the life and teachings of Jesus of Nazareth and Christians believe Jesus to be the Son of God.
The number of the believers in the world is over 2,000,000,000 people, and it is the most it in all religion. There are two main denominations.
Denomination means some part of Christian.
One is Catholicity and the other one is Protestant.
As you know there are many famous events of Christian.
I’ll introduce some events Christmas, Easter and Saint Valentine’s Day.

Christmas is an annual holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus and most places around the world, Christmas Day is celebrated on December 25.

Easter is the festival for celebrates Jesus' resurrection which Christians believe occurred on the third day of his death.
The day of Easter is changed every ear, because it depends on following the cycle of the moon.
2007’s Easter was April 8th and I got Easter card from my host mother ! Symbol of Easter is rabbit that’s why rabbit have many children.
When Easter’s season, people especially children make Easter egg.

Saint Valentine’s Day is a holiday on February 14.
It is the traditional day on which lovers express their love for each other sending some presents.
It is very common to present flowers,Valentine's cards or candy on Valentine's Day in Europe and the United States.
On the other hand, it is common to present chocolate in Japan.


In addition White day is not common in Europe and USA. It started from Japan.
I felt it is very interesting.


In conclusion, Christian is connected with our life.

And I recommend that you go to Church or join some Christian event in Christian Country if you possible.
I think it will be a good experience for you!

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Today I’d like to talk on Christian religion.　
I have two reasons why I became interested in it.

First I will tell you the reasons, then I’ll introduce about Christian.


Now, I’ll tell my experience.
I went to U.S.A. last spring vacation, and I had stayed with my host family, and they are Christian so, I could join some Christian event for example, I went to Church on Sunday.
There were many people who came to church.
The beginning of fold, people say “Good morning , How are you?” and we sang some carol and pray and listened to Bible study.


This is the first reason and second reason is that I went to Christian kindergarten.
When I was kindergartener, I pray every morning in my class.



I will talk on some wisdom of Christian.
First, Christianity is teachings of Jesus of Nazareth.
The number of the believers in the world is over 2,000,000,000 people, and it is the most it in all religion.


There are two main denominations.
Denomination means some part of Christian.

One is Catholicity and the other one is Protestant.


As you know there are many famous events of Christian.
I’ll introduce three events.
Christmas, Easter and Saint Valentine’s Day.


Christmas is an annual holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus and most places around the world, Christmas Day is celebrated on December 25.


Easter is the festival for celebrates Jesus' resurrection.
The day of Easter is changed every year, because it depends on following the cycle of the moon.
2007’s Easter was April 8th and I got Easter card from my host mother!
Symbol of Easter is rabbit that’s why rabbit have many children.
When Easter’s season, people especially children make Easter egg.


Saint Valentine’s Day is a holiday on February 14.
It is the traditional day on which lovers express their love for each other sending some presents.
It is very common to present flowers,Valentine's cards or candy on Valentine's Day in Europe and the United States. On the other hand, it is common to present chocolate in Japan.

In addition White day is not common in Europe and USA. It started from Japan.
I felt it is very interesting.


In conclusion,Christian is connected with our life.
Thank you for your kind reading!